In isolation, the elements of the first painting are very good, but the combination of the cliffs above with the surf break below create an unusual perspective that is hard to reconcile. Good effort, nonetheless.
I think the detail in the cliff is great and the wave is good. The surfer looks like he's wearing a monkey suit. Keep it up.
If in doubt go abstract as you get away with much more.
This is a bit better , i think , yeah newscotty stuffed up the surfer dude , must be wearing a 10mm steamer with hoodThanks for the feedback fellas , ponting out the crap stuff will help my work get better , hopefully